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#firstlinefriday 2.3.2023

Okay, so in book 5 of the MacQuire Women series, PASSION’S PALETTE, we’re back to that action sentence again. And I did what all the experts tell you to NEVER do in a first line – I had my heroine waking up to greet the day.

Le sigh….I’m better now, I swear. LOL

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#firstlinefriday 1.17.2023

From my 4th book in the MacQuire Women Series THE VOICES OF ANGELS. So I’m back to action sentences for starters, LOL! This sentence has A LOT of action, too!

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#firstlineFriday 1.13.2023

From my second book in the MacQuire Women series, THERE’S NO PLACE LIKE HOME. This one’s about Moira Cleary.

Moira Cleary paid the taxi driver and took her first full breath in over twenty-four hours.

This line sets the entire book up, because you want to know Why she’s taking her first full breath in 24 hrs, and where she is? At least, that was my hope, LOL.

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#firstlinefriday

I’m starting something new this year on Fridays – I’m going to post the first line from one of my books to bump up my backlist profile.

So here’s the first one from my very first book SKATER’S WALTZ, published in 2015.

I definitely got better the more books I wrote, lol!

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